User contributions for Sabishii

1 October 2010

• 22:0622:06, 1 October 2010 diff hist −173 Tuskegee Syphilis Study →Study termination and aftermath: Deleted irrelevant comment about flu shots

3 February 2009

• 05:1605:16, 3 February 2009 diff hist +1 m LA CityBeat lowercased professional titles for consistency
• 05:0605:06, 3 February 2009 diff hist +6 m LA CityBeat Add "LA" to paper name in boldface 2008 and 2009 subheads
• 05:0405:04, 3 February 2009 diff hist +395 LA CityBeat added 2009 lay off info

22 September 2008

• 22:2422:24, 22 September 2008 diff hist +58 Los Angeles County Museum of Art →Acquisitions and Donors: grammar; wordiness; infelicitous expression; outdated text (e.g., "when it opens in 2/2008")

12 June 2008

• 05:0505:05, 12 June 2008 diff hist −1,868 LA CityBeat Removed unsourced speculation and subjective comments. Reorganized material for better flow. Moved footnotes to bottom of page. Rewrote to avoid biased text.
• 04:1904:19, 12 June 2008 diff hist +542 LA CityBeat Undid revision 218660167 by 216.70.167.115 (talk)
• 04:1904:19, 12 June 2008 diff hist +2,246 LA CityBeat Undid major deletions at request of CityBeat editors.
• 04:1804:18, 12 June 2008 diff hist +1,794 LA CityBeat Undid major deletions of CityBeat page text at request of CityBeat editors.
• 04:1104:11, 12 June 2008 diff hist −27 Itchiku Kubota removed Living People category
• 04:0904:09, 12 June 2008 diff hist +20 Itchiku Kubota No edit summary
• 04:0604:06, 12 June 2008 diff hist 0 Itchiku Kubota No edit summary
• 00:3800:38, 12 June 2008 diff hist +101 Itchiku Kubota No edit summary
• 00:3600:36, 12 June 2008 diff hist +458 Itchiku Kubota I added more about Kubota's life and his search for tsujigahana, plus info about upcoming exhibitions. Source was the forthcoming Kimono as Art catalogue, by Dale Carolyn Gluckman.
• 00:2000:20, 12 June 2008 diff hist 0 Itchiku Kubota No edit summary
• 00:1900:19, 12 June 2008 diff hist +1,468 Itchiku Kubota No edit summary

20 May 2008

• 06:1306:13, 20 May 2008 diff hist +3 Coyote →Genus controversy: minor punctuation fixes

19 May 2008

• 20:1920:19, 19 May 2008 diff hist −2 Sterno →Sterno in popular culture: fixed typos

6 April 2008

• 02:2202:22, 6 April 2008 diff hist 0 m Mount Fuji →Aokigahara: edit to fix invorrect punctuation (semicolon) in simple compound sentence
• 00:2100:21, 6 April 2008 diff hist −82 m Mount Fuji →Aokigahara: Edit again to fix redundancy, punctuation errors, wordiness, and poor grammar. Does someone have a problem with making this conform to standard English?

5 April 2008

• 23:2523:25, 5 April 2008 diff hist −49 Mount Fuji →Aokigahara: Fixed punctuation problems, verb-tense issues, redundancy, and wordiness.

15 March 2008

• 10:3010:30, 15 March 2008 diff hist −17 m 18th Street gang →Barrio Dieciocho/Mara 18: grammar; sentence structure; capitalization
• 10:2210:22, 15 March 2008 diff hist −3 m 18th Street gang →Location
• 10:2110:21, 15 March 2008 diff hist +2 m 18th Street gang →History
• 10:1910:19, 15 March 2008 diff hist +27 m 18th Street gang grammar fixes...periods, commas, and such

12 February 2008

• 07:0207:02, 12 February 2008 diff hist +18 Nanzen-ji more specific identification of image

25 January 2008

• 03:5303:53, 25 January 2008 diff hist +1 Ban Chiang →Sources
• 03:5103:51, 25 January 2008 diff hist +57 Ban Chiang Grammer fixes.

7 January 2008

• 02:4002:40, 7 January 2008 diff hist +185 To Build a Fire →Summary
• 02:3702:37, 7 January 2008 diff hist −180 To Build a Fire →Link Between Nature and Man: Grammar, sense.
• 02:3002:30, 7 January 2008 diff hist −124 To Build a Fire →Characters: The Protagonist/Antagonist argument was poorly expressed and didn't make sense. I edited for grammar and content.
• 02:2202:22, 7 January 2008 diff hist +48 To Build a Fire →Summary: fixed spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and grammar errors

31 October 2007

• 21:1321:13, 31 October 2007 diff hist +4 Harry Gamboa Jr. →Works
• 21:1221:12, 31 October 2007 diff hist +17 Harry Gamboa Jr. Fixed grammar, capitalization, hyphenation...little things, basically, to improve the text
• 21:0721:07, 31 October 2007 diff hist +13 Los Four →Brief history and significance
• 21:0421:04, 31 October 2007 diff hist +34 Los Four →Brief history and significance: added wiki links and LACMA exhibition dates; rebroke paragraphs for clarity; fixed punctuation and grammar
• 21:0021:00, 31 October 2007 diff hist +45 Los Four →Brief history
• 20:5820:58, 31 October 2007 diff hist +91 Los Four →Brief history
• 20:5420:54, 31 October 2007 diff hist +45 Los Four →Brief history

22 October 2007

• 06:5506:55, 22 October 2007 diff hist +503 Talk:Agglutinative language →Number of Japanese irregular verbs

11 October 2007

• 00:4600:46, 11 October 2007 diff hist +32 Pavilion for Japanese Art No edit summary
• 00:4300:43, 11 October 2007 diff hist 0 Pavilion for Japanese Art →Collections
• 00:4200:42, 11 October 2007 diff hist +32 Pavilion for Japanese Art →Photo gallery
• 00:4100:41, 11 October 2007 diff hist +559 Pavilion for Japanese Art →Architecture
• 00:3300:33, 11 October 2007 diff hist +38 Pavilion for Japanese Art No edit summary
• 00:2700:27, 11 October 2007 diff hist 0 m Pavilion for Japanese Art →Collections
• 00:2700:27, 11 October 2007 diff hist −1 m Pavilion for Japanese Art →Collections
• 00:2500:25, 11 October 2007 diff hist −61 Pavilion for Japanese Art →Collections

10 October 2007

• 23:4323:43, 10 October 2007 diff hist −1 Pavilion for Japanese Art →Architechture: fixed typo in Architecture

17 September 2007

• 19:3319:33, 17 September 2007 diff hist +523 Carolyn Wells Added footnotes. Fixed grammer, wordiness, typos, formatting. Tried to fact check title pub dates, but ran out of time.